Sharon D asked: “Here we go doll,” shouts Eddie “62nd street.” He helps get my luggage out of the trunk and I can’t believe what I am seeing. A green velvet rug leads into the doorway with a matching canopy overhead. A posh looking man stands by the door. I have only seen these images [...]
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What do you think of my storyline so far, and what do you think of my writing style?
Always in Your Heart ♥ asked: When life gives you lemons… make lemonade. That’s what my dad always tells me when I’m stuck in a crappy situation. But to be honest, I don’t think that advice will work this one out. It feels as if I’ve been given rotten lemons, with no juice left in [...]
What do you think of the start of my chapter 2? Tell me what you think?
Sharon D asked: “Here we go doll,” shouts Eddie “62nd street.” He helps get my luggage out of the trunk and I can’t believe what I am seeing. A green velvet rug leads into the doorway with a matching canopy overhead. A posh looking man stands by the door. I have only seen these images [...]
Does my first chapter have too much detail in it? Re asking?
*BubblyWeirdo* asked: My friends say it does, but I think it has too little detail. Please help me. Chapter one “Now Tara, I don’t want to hear any bad news from Ma, while you’re staying with her. Understand?” Tara’s mother, Tasha warned, her ebony skin glowing in the bright sun. She stood tall in black [...]
Could some one please give me some feedback on this?
Sexy Tuba asked: Chapter 1 my role as fate: It was 12:07 A.M. The sun was beating down but besides the heat it was near perfect weather. Unfortunately I couldn’t enjoy such a nice day. At least it wasn’t my last. The brief case felt slightly heavy in my hands. I walked up the the [...]
What do you think of my story so far?
Always in Your Heart ♥ asked: When life gives you lemons… make lemonade. That’s what my dad always tells me when I’m stuck in a crappy situation. But to be honest, I don’t think that advice will work this one out. It feels as if I’ve been given rotten lemons, with no juice left in [...]
is this a good beginning for my book?
Buzz L asked: A kiss from Mom and hug from Dad away before I get on the plane, I thought rolling my luggage behind me as we approached the boarding line. “Yes, I have everything, Mom.” She seemed too busy to realize I had answered her but surprised me with replying back. “Great, well are [...]
What do you think of my storyline so far, and what do you think of my writing style?
Always in Your Heart ♥ asked: When life gives you lemons… make lemonade. That’s what my dad always tells me when I’m stuck in a crappy situation. But to be honest, I don’t think that advice will work this one out. It feels as if I’ve been given rotten lemons, with no juice left in [...]
Is this story any good?
Kate asked: This is just the first little bit of a story I wrote. I want your honest opinion. Thanks! ~~~~~~ I grabbed my bag off the luggage carrier. This was my first cruise! I had turned 15 on Thursday, and this was my present. I was super excited. We had never really had enough [...]
Would you tell me what you think of my chapter 2, please?
Sharon D asked: Hi, I wrote this a while ago and don’t know what to do to make it better, I know its long and if you take the time I will really be very grateful x 2 “Here we go doll, 62nd street,” As Eddie helps get my luggage out of the trunk, I [...]