{{ s i l v e r }} eριcαяιcαcу ♥ asked:
It’s the first chapter to my cousin Layton’s story, Innocence is Bliss. She’s almost 14.
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CHAPTER ONE
“Mademoiselle Reid?”
My attention was drawn away from the weight of my luggage to the suited man standing beside the midnight Cadillac before me.
“That’s me,” I said, bewildered. Who the [...]
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Does the beginning of my romance story intrigue you?
hello asked:
Or does it bore you?
I had always been a suburban girl, so the notion of packing my few belongings in a pair of ruddy, ancient suitcases and moving to the country seems preposterous. But a marriage and subsequent divorce are also ludicrous ideas to me, yet here I am, holding the papers, the [...]
How does the beginning of my novel sound?
C asked:
Tell me what you think! And be honest! Helpful tips are appreciated!
—Some girls long for attention. I was not one of those girls. So when I walked into the Grand Hall of my new “home away from home,” Barrington Academy, and saw a room full of guys go silent and watch me as [...]
Is the WRITING DECENT?
Soraya asked:
Ok, later this will be a story… a long 100 somethign page story. But here’s the first two pages… what do you think so far? Is the detail good and stuff? (i’m 14 years old)
The large, white Delta plane soared in the sky. Obeying the pilots’ hands, it turned slowly to begin facing [...]
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Robin asked:
Okay this was origionally some homework i did for English class, but it kinda morphed into a mini project when the teacher basicly licked my shoes (metaphoricaly speaking) and grovelled at my brilliance today in class. Its about the Titanic, sorry if its kinda long:
We had boarded the great ship, the ‘Titanic’ at [...]
Does the beginning of my romance story intrigue you?
hello asked:
Or does it bore you?
I had always been a suburban girl, so the notion of packing my few belongings in a pair of ruddy, ancient suitcases and moving to the country seems preposterous. But a marriage and subsequent divorce are also ludicrous ideas to me, yet here I am, holding the papers, the [...]
what age would you think this writer is ?
Sydney asked:
My aunt Susan woke me up at seven thirty-five Saturday morning. It was a chilly morning in Forks WA, clouds coated the sky like a blanket; dark and gray. I groggily walked to the washroom. The intense bright light was harsh on my morning eyes. I brushed through my tangled hair and [...]
Do you think im a good author? please comment. and be HONEST?
Amethyst <33 asked:
ive always been self concious and my frind told me to post some of one of my stories on here. only my family and my best freind has read them ecause im scared people wont like it…..PLEASE BE HONEST THOUGH!
if you think i need more improvment tell me!
The pilot announced. I was [...]
Do you like my story so far?
clean_tie asked:
Sophie packed her last t-shirt into her over stuffed suitcase. Tonight she was off to La Ventka academy As Sophie walked down the stairs turning off the lights on the way while walking down the extremely long stair case she thought why would someone buy a house so beautiful house and never be [...]